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xan51041yrReplied to InflameousCh 2 What Happened?- xan51042yrReplied to Tbz_LpcCh 78 Living Together (2)
- xan51042yrReplied to Rune_God
It's how it where I live, we can drink at 18, go clubbing, get married ,but we can only smoke at 21 XD
"In our family, we always pass on this pendant to our eldest son when he comes of age. I have worn it for decades. Now, it is yours." He explained solemnly. I clutched it in my fist and put it on immediately. It had a good heft to it and the chain felt light and i was unbothered by its presence. I smiled at him. " It looks good on you." He said truthfully. However, I can detect a slight tinge of resentment. I never met my grandfather. Or my cousins, if i even had any. - xan51042yrReplied to Rune_God
NOT WHAT I MEANT BUT OK up for Interpretation get creative, just know ,not what I meant XD
"Jeez Kaler… are you alright?" The voice that once was full of resolve and anger was now soft and caring. The figure bent down to look at my face. I saw her. A bright looking girl with a cheerful expression. Her hair and eyes were both light blue in colour. The marking of a true ice mage. She appeared to be wearing a thin winter jacket, jeans and boots. "Kaler! Come on. You can stand right?" I only managed a weak smile as I felt blood trickle from my lips. I felt my energy escaping from me, like there was a hole in my body, letting the energy leak out. - xan51042yrReplied to God_Fruit_Tree
You know...not what I intended XD
"Jeez Kaler… are you alright?" The voice that once was full of resolve and anger was now soft and caring. The figure bent down to look at my face. I saw her. A bright looking girl with a cheerful expression. Her hair and eyes were both light blue in colour. The marking of a true ice mage. She appeared to be wearing a thin winter jacket, jeans and boots. "Kaler! Come on. You can stand right?" I only managed a weak smile as I felt blood trickle from my lips. I felt my energy escaping from me, like there was a hole in my body, letting the energy leak out. - xan51042yrReplied to OverlordBGs
:)
"Poor choice. I'll say this once. We can either bring you in warm, or we can bring you in cold." Ardante's voice got lower as he said his sentence, his hand near the sheathed blade on his waist. Robotically, all the men behind him also trained their guns on Kaler. Travis panicked seeing this and Astere was also too frozen with rage and fear. "What's it going to be?" - xan51042yrReplied to OverlordBGsCh 57 Loved Ones (3)
- xan51042yrReplied to Flirt48
Changed chapter names, I realised the previous two dont really suit the name
Living Together (1) - xan51042yrReplied to DEMONSoldier
Hi hi! So firstly, I wanna thank you for the string of comments you have left! I would thank you personally, but it seems I am incapable of doing so. So I just wanna say, thank you for the constructive criticism you have left. I will use it to improve upon my further works. As for the drama portion. Well, I agree with you actually. I never meant for it to be so dramatic, it's just kinda how my mind processes and thinks.✌️✌️ But in my view, though it may be cringy, I still think it is better than sticking to what reality who most likely be like. Because in real life, at least personally, I never react to anything, my face is always stoned :) .So yeah, hope you end up reading this, and to anyone else reading this, I do not accept criticism very well, cuz I'm a rather sensitive person, but I hope you do still leave some behind.
"How did you know, Alistair?" I asked dangerously. He chuckled and backed off slightly. Alistair was the only other person I could call a friend. He looks intimidating at first but looks are deceiving. However, he has many other friends, and many people trying to get his attention. A byproduct of being rich, attractive and intelligent. The son of a tech genius and developer…what is he doing with a low life like me? - xan51042yrReplied to shadow_serpentCh 51 The Answer to My Question (2)
- xan51042yrReplied to shadow_serpentCh 50 The Answer to My Question (1)
- xan51042yrReplied to sdadad_adsasasaCh 45 Ingram, Avatar of the Wind
- xan51042yrReplied to shadow_serpentCh 35 Island Villa
- xan51042yrReplied to sdadad_adsasasaCh 28 Secret’s Unveiled
- xan51042yrReplied to sdadad_adsasasaCh 21 Pain Repaid