Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: World on Fire

I have loved reading this story and am excited for the next chapter. Hopefully it will come out soon. I can’t wait to see what abilities he will get from the arena beasts when he visits them.

I’m a bit young and new to Webnovel but let’s just say I consumed this a bit too fast. As I continued reading your illustrations are great and the way you delivered new character were done wonderfully done, can’t wait for Samuel’s new competition.

the chapter felt a bit flamboyant and dramatic with the word use and imagery. the fight scene itself was good, but I found the beginning and end of the chapter to be a little cliché. (still enjoyed it through)

thanks for the chapter! I had a blast reading your work. However, after the break, it's hard to remember all the new characters, but that's no problem. What bothers me right now is the overuse of flowery words and descriptions. I am feeling not as if i am reading about the dueling tournament but rather the picturesque image of the waterfall in the mountains. Can't feel the rush and the emotions of the duels. But overall it was fine.