Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: World on Fire

im getting feel I've read this exact chapter in a older fanfic but the main oc is from house black he also called knight by adoption, but he has a spiritual sword inside his body.

While an interesting story for the most part, a main character that takes enjoyment out of an abused orphan being bullied by a murderer, especially when said murderer is partially responsible for the murder of said orphan's parents, is completely off putting. I am not saying that the MC should outshine the Chosen One, but it would certainly be beneficial for him to make powerful connections, and sadly the path he is currently on shows him as nothing more than a revenge driven loner that will ultimately accomplish nothing.

id like to point out that the ror is on the same floor as the door to the gryffindor common room and is actualy only about 2 halls away from them. it makes more sense for them to use it then going down stairs and back up stairs constantly (thats besides classes of course, but during weekends?)

So... Did you and HPMan go over ideas together because your stories are word for word copies

I thank you for the chapter

I love having him as a mentor.

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just say that Voldemort hangs around the seventh floor to check out the hocrux, ou algo do tipo.

I’d like to point out that the color of the Stupify spell is red not blue

Thanks for the chap