Too many paragraphs about the noise of his car ... Even when the MC ignores the reactions of people to his car WE CANT because you still write about it!
It's staring to feel like those cliche OC/SI where they somehow get along easily with the main cast and romance starts blooming like they're on steroids.
Ita just, it feels like the story is moving away from game making and game content to pursue in novel IRL life
it's just me or the quality of this fanfic is falling? The author probably don't even know what he's doing, he should just keep making games instead of going in a barbecue or a shopping.