Darksky_ll
So initial impression is okay, grammar is good. Not the best start as comedy is not my cup of tea but okay, transmigration explanation was unnecessary in my opinion as having some mystery around it would keep the readers guessing while coming up with their own explanations. Same goes for the destruction of the universe where the universe doesn't even feels like an universe (I know) because it's too small, probably like size of an solar system (which is still quite big) but an solar system is just an tiny insignificant part of the universe that we live in so it's like an ant trying to destroy the earth it doesn't make sense even for most fantasy gods their powers at most can destroy planets which the "the world". It would have made sense to use dimension or realm rather that universe as it is more believable. This just some suggestions as it's author's novel he gets to decide what the universe is.