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Inkly_Taboo2mthPostedim 10 chapters in and the level of cringe hurts me. let's list out the things that give me the urge to wretch while reading. MC has white hair(including the whole family apparently) MC is a cuckold MC has a Katana named Katara(double whammy) The opening scene has 'im a very badass' scene. Shouts the name of there attacks outloud(actually doesn't bother me to much but I know it bothers a lot of other people) What the author could do make it worse. Name your MC or any character some shitty name like zero, void, hero.(a parent doesn't look at their child and think, "yes you look like a zero to me.") Make references to external media.(Naruto and Marvel seem to be the biggest offenders) Like I've watched maybe 30 episodes of the first Naruto series and I know shit. so please don't call magic eye powers what ever the hell Naruto calls them. I could continue but I'm losing steam from my Lil rant and would rather continue reading for now. Overall don't try and show us how badass your character is. Just let the story progress normally, their badass-ness will show over time. Actions over words or some shit like that.
- Inkly_Taboo5mthCommentedCh 648 647. The Hive Project
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- Inkly_Taboo1yrCommented
human world?
"It's called the Phantasmal Storm," Marcus replied. "It's a rare occurrence that happens once every few years. During the storm, the magical properties of the Forest of Hallucinations will overflow and the veil between the human world and the demon world is weakened, and demons are more likely to cross over into our world." - Inkly_Taboo1yrReplied to Jus7aguy'Sh*t!' I couldn't help but drop this idea for now. 'One thousand coins? Just to view the list?! What will it cost me to listen to one recording then? Couple thousands, or even ten thousand coins? That's a sh*t load of coins for me right now!'
- Inkly_Taboo1yrReplied to Jus7aguy
my dude I read that book like 8 months ago, I don't even know what your talking about?
'Sh*t!' I couldn't help but drop this idea for now. 'One thousand coins? Just to view the list?! What will it cost me to listen to one recording then? Couple thousands, or even ten thousand coins? That's a sh*t load of coins for me right now!' - Inkly_Taboo1yrCommentedCh 24 Prisoner
- Inkly_Taboo1yrCommentedCh 20 Those at the Top#2
- Inkly_Taboo1yrCommentedCh 246 Life Or Death
- Inkly_Taboo1yrReplied to Hitoshi_Misaki
wow that came far out of left field.
During 2022, in the mid-stages of WWIII, a special division under the name 'Salvation' was formed in the UN, tasked with the creation of a massive airtight and radiation-resistant dome structure, located in Russia. This dome was a massive 200,000 square kilometers in size, and would later be dubbed the 'Sanctuary'. A water supply was acquired by tapping into several underwater springs, and thousands of plants were taken into it so that there would be an oxygen supply as well. - Inkly_Taboo1yrCommentedCh 9 Stabbed in the back
- Inkly_Taboo1yrCommented
I recall in a previous chapter he managed to completely cut through a tree. he's even stronger now. so why cant he cut it?
Alex swung his sword to the left, burying it horizontally in the trunk of the tree. The sword got stuck, and Alex used it to reposition his body, putting his feet on the trunk. - Inkly_Taboo1yrCommented
Honestly I think he should of rebelled a bit and see if he could use loop holes. such as using Alexander or using a entire new name to go against this being X. Being X only said he will feel pain when he uses his old name, he never said anything about feeling pain when not using Shang as a name.
Or had he already become Shang? - Inkly_Taboo2yrCommented
If you ever feel lost seek guidance from our Lord and saviour Vin Diesal. The answer is always family.
"I don't know really, I… I'm confused myself, but I promise to come back stronger, I need to protect your, no never mind, our family." - Inkly_Taboo2yrReplied to Inkly_TabooCh 73 Time To End My Nightmare! [2]
- Inkly_Taboo2yrCommented
Hunt a deer or a few rabbits? Nah lets just rob people and hope they are carrying food.
*Death element activate; Shadow step,* A trip which took them three hours was completed in just five minutes. Savaview bridge was in sight, there were more guards than earlier. The Castle seemed to light up faintly, a feast was ongoing. "What perfect timing, feeding eight people isn't that easy, however, it's my duty as their leader. Can't believe I've been doing this ever since I met up with the Geua sisters. It all began with the village, then travelers and then bandits. Now I'm about to rob a castle." He sighed.