Comments of chapter undefined of The Indie Gamer

thanks for the chapter also fanart, although i may have posted it as a paragraph comment earlier, I'm posting it on this chapter comments for criticism

Thanks for the chapiter nanoda~ More!!

very good. just out of curiosity shouldn't he be immune to radiance? as far as I understood the MC's body and an endless void.

Alright, I caught up and I'm past 30 chapters. The overall story is about a 7/10 it's an okay story but not really special or interesting in any real way beyond the system even that isn't faithful to the concept including games that aren't indie and he seems to forget about parts of it frequently. It feels more like a hollow knight ff but with a system tacked on for why they didn't get killed instantly despite clicking hard mode. It's better then a lot of random stories on here but that's mostly because it hasn't devolved into random s*x with random characters 'yet' it is a decent first story though. It mostly just needs some better grammar and an actual direction for the story. At the moment it's kind of just following cliches and the main character grew attached to characters instantly and has a chunni dark and edgy thing inside them and the author getting bored with one idea so tacking on another to progress things faster.

thanks for the chapter