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Comments of chapter undefined of Incubus's Curse: Path To Incubism

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Incubus's Curse: Path To Incubism

TurtleMaster6319

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Xul
XulLv10Xul

The novel switches between dark and serious to/from light and comedic quite often. Intentional or not, it feels chaotic yet not random. I like it. The style this chapter begins in adds on to it rather nicely too. Though, not sure if switching PoVs is the right call. At least not as often and not as soon.

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Xul
XulLv10Xul

Oh, and I don’t think locations (or objectives? Why?) should be left out like that. Could just integrate them into the paragraphs.

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Johnathon_Magus
Johnathon_MagusLv3Johnathon_Magus

The references break the immersion of this being a completely different world. It’s to be frank vexing and unwelcome. Because it makes me question if this a partel universe with fantasy or not? Also the POV and pacing is cringe. You can’t make head’s or tails of what is going on!

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RARC19
RARC19Lv4RARC19

Thanks for the chapter!

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Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

im lost

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap

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Milf_Supremacy
Milf_SupremacyLv4Milf_Supremacy

It's still lacking the context.

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