Comments of chapter undefined of The Wrong Bride!

Too much narrations … slow pacing of the plot. I had to skip some pages to get to the point where they’re really conversing.

My curiosity is building. so much mystery!!

It is well written and intriguing.

Wow. Little scared mouse!! At some point he will realize how out of character she is if he is really in love with Elle, which, it seems as if he is 🤔

I find myself skip a lot of paragraphs to get to the main point the description of her thoughts is very long it may take 2 hours for her to realize that she is zoning out not a split of second try to make it shorter please

it is interesting but at the same time I am annoyed by her 'being sorry and overwhelmed' all the time. Go home like her father asked or change your tune is something I tend to think

It bothers me a lot. She is always scared ☹

please avoid writing in a going round and round and round manner . I need lot of fp to read which everyone can't afford

very interesting

This story is very interesting .l find the plot intriguing.l’m trying to figure out whats really going on.,the supence makes me want to keep reading until l finish the story.

me likey....

Intriguining.. mystified to see how things pan out

it's intriguing

loving it so far

Neveah or Nevaeh?

please avoid writing in a going round and round and round manner. need of fo read which everyone can't afford

chapter 15 and still no story of how her sister knows this guy besides the little tidbit that she was I think a magazine writer and had written a story on him. and then he mentioned in his head that he'd only met her once before. lots of chapters to not have that any information yet

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I read this and cant but it down because the story is wonderful to read