Comments of chapter undefined of In Marvel with template system
In Marvel with template system
MynameJeff
Chapter comments21
Rhe story recently has absolutely zero progression. It has been a literal recount of the marvel universe with twists. The story stop being the Authour's story after OFA reach like 10 percent. Authour focus on the MC, his plans, goals and thoughts for the future need to be made clear. His system functions, abilities and shop tools availiable are in chaos and unclearly demonstreated with a lack of depth. Story was well and intresting with the Cedric template, even giving out missions. Now its truly getting lost, does not matter how many new templates if there is reacurring problems. MC need to solve his problems, actually come up with solutions to his weakness or work towards them. The Mc actually needs to create a plan to getting stronger, implemnt it immediately and dedicate to said plan with consistency. Instead of you the authour telling us with the philopspher stone he can now trian longer. What in the world author, a sentence is not enough especially such a vague one. Recently you have literally ignored the Mc powers(system obtained or possible bodily powers like the x-gene), the system(dont update the system), Midoriya skills or training(Time for mc to actually focus on increasing quirks or current quirk appliance and control) and the mc's actually fighting capabilites or increasing his knowledge (no more explanations or a lack of explanations on the mc obtaining knowledge on biology, human anatomy, fighting techniques or using the store for knwoledge. Along with actual combat training being absolutely unpresent, seems like authour just going to wait till template that can fight appears). Authour we know it is necessary to create more interactions with other characters, but not to this point. Marvel stroy is there we know and you have clearly demonstrated how it is progressing along with the changes to the Marvel Universe. However Mc progression, plans, future and overall time to MC self is gone and has no porgression at all. Just feel like presently I am reading a whole bunch of marvel movies slapped together and its displayed from MC point of view every now and then. Please, try to understand your doing amazing, but can do so much better, consider what i said. I may have misunderstood some of your intentions and truly if so, I apologize. However I am sure that the Protgaonist should have his own story and unlike before when it talked about hogwarts, his training, difficulties, future problems like legelimency and solutions like occulemency as well as self time to think, study or workout. Now MC journey and future plans is gone, in s way you could say his story or path is gone or halted as well. What I am saying is truly not unreasonable. Authour in all honesty I have read till this latest chapter, there must he some truth to what i said. All said and done I do enjoy your story. Thank you and good luck with the rest of your story! Looking forward to it!!
In addition to agreeing with another comment saying that you got lost, and didn't develop the protagonist, it just seems like you're copying and pasting marvel content showing a little bit of the mc's thoughts, I also think it doesn't make sense for him not to help Matt because he can't turn midoriya, he's already shown that cedric and midoriya are friends, why can't he help matt like Cedric?
Please can we have Madara as next template. What do we get(peak Madara) :- 1)TALENT × God knows how much 2) Peak uchiha powers 3) Rinnegan 4) Senjutsu that he stole 5)10 tail jinchuriki chakra 6)Six path chakra & truth seeking orbs 7) Rinnesharingan Bunch of other amazing powers I don't know or I missed.
