Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature

I'm gonna be honest probably gonna take a year or two, been reading a few other novels to get inspiration from.I might post occasional chapters once in awhile but I would rather do a mass release at once, the prologue was experimental.but in the meantime why don't you read some novels to, the one I'm currently reading is pretty good the writing style is amazing and the protagonist is just so interesting.if you don't mind reading novels then try reading Salvos(a monsters evolution litpg)it's a fantasy based novel on a demon's point of view in a fantasy world with a system .plus, it also helped me realize that maybe I should put more inner dialogue, thoughts between conversations instead of looking at it from someone else's pov.