marichat_nettenoir
So far I like the story. But to me I think it starts off weird, not really a fan of the future snippet into a flashback, then your playing catch-up. Now I have to watch for where the story catches up to the beginning. I get itâs a great way to give some background details while introducing key characters, itâs just not my preference. I really do like the novel and will continue to support your work. Thanks