Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)

Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)

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KrutchLv4Krutch

I'm liking it for the most part, but everything to this point just seems so....juvenile. The interactions with the angels, how Duncan acts around people. It just seems a bit odd for someone meant to be a paladin. Then again, a turn for the more serious may seem jarring if it's too sudden at this point. At any rate, you do you, author. I'll keep reading and see what you have in mind for your story.

2yr

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Slytherin733945Lv4Slytherin733945

this chapter was so beautiful and the ending of it brought tears to my eyes I can't wait for the next one.👍😎👍😎

2yr

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JamesshintoLv5Jamesshinto

Ohh why, why, THE CRINGE

2yr

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IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter

2yr

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SlxxpyLv12Slxxpy

This is good so far do not get discouraged by the low views and keep updating and eventually you will get more views because all the good got ff are done or have bad update schedules

2yr

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quintusmirusLv4quintusmirus

Embodiment of sweetness :-)

2yr

ebrahim_bahadeliLv2ebrahim_bahadeli

Honestly the story is quite good for your first time, I just have one question. Will the MC and the other characters become more serious as time passes or will it stay so... lighthearted?

9mth

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