Sigh ... At least it doesn't really makes Mc most handsome , smart , talented, popular and crush of heroine and makes the original protagonist villain on its first impression

The dialogue is pretty lame to the anger hype build up sigh . .. Just state ur purpose it's cooler that way

Yeah majority of users do it actually

Where are the images upload in comment section next time man

Just use northern blade mangwa inspiration

Why is it so easy for Chinese mc to kill

Eastern dragons looks truly ugly at first glance

He gonna go weak if he recklessly strengthen himself not improving himself in every aspect

Witch such weak power he should be slapped in an instant nothing really makes sense

Why such useless scenes

Why is it necessary to bring out unneeded tension among the villain toward the mc sigh everyone is always handsome and beautiful if ur in the camp of the protagonist typical chinese

When u introduce the character zat We don't need his introduction like that it's feels unnecessary just let him introduce himself in front of mc it's more appealing then

Don't always go around throwing hero motivation it's feels like a wacky man somehow force to do a hero job be relax a bit even almighty is enthusiastic but only gives heroic motivation when required it's feels a bit cool too

Give him a name already don't wait for academy arc it's Clark kents it's boring

Yo U idea was great but I think the conversation is mechanical put yourself in the position and think whether saying all that was necessary

It's so awkward it feels sweet to I think a little however the dialogue and the situations of delivery are very bumble jumbled

Don't be some justice lover man if so go full throttle half baked justice makes bad stories

From description alone feels typical chinese novel

Man of all the wrong choices u can make

Yo we don't want another emo charcter man