Любишь звёзды? Могу послать тебе много бальзама "звёздочка" у меня целая коробка к новому году припасено да и вряд ли хоть как-то смогу открыть хоть одну не ломая пальцы
I didn't read the first iteration of this book past the first chapter because of how fast paced it looked, but I can say that this is a very well done fic, good job!
All i can say is this is a major improvement from the other novel that you did at first i was thinking it Ay not be as good or is may even be horrible but nope its a beautiful work of art!