Comments of chapter undefined of In Danmachi with Plasmids
In Danmachi with Plasmids
Abadom
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Thank you for the chapter! I have to say this is the greatest Danmachi I have ever read, this only shows the effort and quality of the author. I have a few things to ask or suggest can you make the Mc bring more technology to the world? I feel mc has focused too much on his leveling up and becoming stronger but he stopped creating new things such as armor or weapons. Will silver's harem get bigger? Would he have new abilities such as mind control or time stop? Would he make a contract with spirit? Also, you could bring more research in genetics as it would be interesting if he could absorb things like elve's lifespan or enhanced senses of demi human.
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Abadom
I love the story but can you add more of a slice of life. The danger is gone so now, he doesn’t need to jump into the dungeon to get stronger. A person isn’t a machine. After all the fighting and injuries, he needs a huge break. Realistically, a person can face a burnout. You can focus on his famillia now. Maybe add a few different P.O.V’s , maybe a training arc. He can be an instructor. Maybe an accidental date or two. Maybe he can convince a few ladies to help him train his famillia for fun. Perhaps he can find a real apprentice. Honestly I hope he doesn’t heal all his injuries quickly, the injuries can add character development. Hopefully in the future he get real companions in the dungeon. If there isn’t anyone who he can team up with, why doesn’t he make one. He can search for people with potential and raise them up. I’m sure he has a way to make people stronger, or give people a special ability. In his previous world he was alone, I’m sure he doesn’t want to be alone in the dungeon either. Think about it.
