Abadom
Author do you have a thing for cripples? Maybe you like gore p*rn? I donât know whatâ up with every Author having to cripple their MC for one reason or another. Itâs like they canâ write a good story if their MC is in one piece. One of my favorite moments is Whitebeards back being shown. Heâs covere in scars but not a single one on his back cause he never ran away. He also didnât lose limbs, didnât take away from how much of a monster he was.
Honestly think you should have had silver rip his eyes out on stage to truly drive hoke the point of how much of a monster he truly is. Yeah one can suffer losing his arms or burning but to then rip his eyes out, there's no way in he'll anyone would want to face such a person who is more merciless to himself than his enemy. At least in my heart this ending fits more so that's how this chapter ended off for me mentally..
I know I'm a bit late to expect the author's attention on this comment in this chapter, but I really want one of silver's gene tonics things to cause a greater expression of his 1/4th demo human genes. I just think it would be neat for his actual genetics to be a part of the things the tonic acted on.