Comments of chapter undefined of In Danmachi with Plasmids

I'm having a hard time reading this novel with the unnecessary apostrophes.

You made the MC waste his time before going to the dungeon? You cannot be F serious... I thought he would go to orario at most at 12 years old, join loki familia and train up. But noooo... he was hunting goblins and orcs outside orario for almost 5 more years...

Am i the only one who doesnt know the name lf the mc yet?

the idea is good but the grammar does not let me enjoy the novel, also stop using the " for each sentence it becomes annoying

I'm pretty sure I'm going disappointed In who's the mc harem is

I really hope your MC maxes out all of his stats before leveling, because if not then it's a complete waste of time...

Awesome and very well written

It's cool to make armor like Goblin Slayer's. It's impressive

Te disculpas pero no lo corriges :/ no se que pensar. Pero en todo caso es complicado de leer no porque sea ilegible pero la manera que esta hecho es como si supieras lo que significa una palabra pero no puedes comprender el significado detras de ellos ya analizarlo.

Thanks for the chapter

This is annoying, they make me think at first that he is human so now change him and make him human, this is annoying, if I had known from the beginning it would be fine but now it bothers me, disgusting, annoying things keep accumulating and I only go through the chapter Three, I don't think I'll last much longer, and for god's sake I hate it when they journal their future knowledge, there's always the option of some god finding out, and even if it doesn't, it's a pathetic and disgusting nuisance.

Gracias por el capitulo

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Thanks for the chapter

I noticed some inconsistencies with the tenses (using present tense in one paragraph then suddenly switching to past tense in another) and the point of views, sometimes being third person and then switching to first person. Overall though, it doesn't affect the experience and I don't mind. Keep up the good work!

Reading!

thanks for the chapter 👍

Thx

Орк спрятался в кустах, ты серьёзно? Почему все резко отупели?