NoWoRRyMaN
Everything has been pretty good so far. This could use some romance in the future, I love me some good romance. I talked about romance because of the guy who said no romance, made me upset. And this battle coming up might convince him that he was underestimating the “game” or that world. He’s obviously going to survive which means he’s going to win the battle but still. Thanks for the chapter.
Make the mc smart too, he seem a bit lacking. I don’t know if it is just me but i find the mcs (in monologue) who like to analyze people or things intriguing.Even going as far as to guess others thoughts and see through them so they can prepare counter measures, after all anyone could stab u in the back.It amazes me when mcs think through every step they take and not just brush everything off bc of annoyance, laziness or too lazy to use their brains. It’d be better if he doesn’t become one of those mcs that are either too obsessed with their family or bc of their naive and ignorant perception of the world( like, they be thinking living is all about serving or sacrificing for others, and selfishness is a sin etc.) to the point where they either looses the purpose to live or go crazy after a disaster befalls their loved ones, that’s lame.