Comments of chapter undefined of Civilization

Wow so far everything is on point

lol seems like the author isn't one for conversations. that was the most awkward invitation to join I've ever read 😅

As badz_brody said, more commas (,) would go a long way in making the story a bit more readable. It's much more well written than most things on this site though, so good job with that.

Thanks for the chap

Thanks

thanks for the chapter

Don't forget (,). Thanks.

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Definitely enjoying the story. Though as I mentioned earlier, I'm seeing run on sentences and they disrupt the flow a little. You're doing a great job though.

does every thing burst into purple smoke if killed ?? people in that world never eat meat :v also if every player logs off what happened to the body in that world whether behaving and self-aware