Comments of chapter undefined of The Order of Huntsmen

Is this a rough draft? A FEW errors? Sentences that are incomplete, incoherent; completely wrong words, really bad punctuation. It MIGHT be an interesting story if not for the constant mistakes. I am an experienced reader but Sentences and paragraphs without an error were outnumbered. If I had bought this at a bookstore, I would return it for a refund. Not the seller's fault but the publisher needs to be held accountable. If English is not your language, get an editor.