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Karen_Armadillo_6562

Karen_Armadillo_6562

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2022-05-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Replied to Ace2hunter

    where?

    "I mean, we can't expect me to fine all the time. What if I get into an accident like last time? Or what if I get sick? There has to be a plan on how the Reyes Group will continue to function without me." Cedric explained.
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    Never Judge
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    The? Again?

    "You don't believe me?" The Selina asked. "My name is Selina Ramirez and my company is the top fashion house in the country. There is only one version of that dress and it's sitting in my showroom. So if you are trying to tell me that the dress on you is an original it means that you either stole it or that's a fake." Selina said, as she crossed her arms across her chest and looked down at the woman.
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    My Broken Playboy
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Replied to bitesizednin

    You've already decided Selina is lying? You believe Jen?

    "You know that I told her from the start that I didn't like her like that. I mean, I'm straight." Selina said frantically.
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    My Broken Playboy
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    regally, 2 ls

    Selina blushed at the compliment the elegant lady just said. Rebekah Sebastian sat regaly next to her husband, her long black hair fell straight behind her shoulders as she moved like an empress.
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    My Broken Playboy
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    not the before Rebekah

    "Uncle, Auntie." The twins greeted them at the same time making the Rebekah giggle.
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    My Broken Playboy
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    fathers, without the apostrophe

    "It's time." Cedric told his guests. "I want you to announce that aside from your legitimate heirs, you have decided to consider your illegitimate children as well." Cedric instructed as he looked at each of the father's in the eyes.
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    fathers plural, not father's possessive.

    The father's however were stunned with the powerful Ayanna Reyes - Laurence, acting like a child in front of her older brother.
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    I do love Camilla. She's smart

    "I can guarantee you almost every major project of Mor Co." Camilla said with a grin. 
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    shake theirs*

    "Mr. Abad, Mr. Laurence, it's an honor to meet you!" Carlo said as he walked over, raising his hand to shake thiers. In the past he was afraid to approach Ray and Alexi due to what they had done to him and his friends, but since there was now a mutual benefit he didn't think that Ray would treat him badly.
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    Great to read something with few typos, grammatical errors. You don't write like a 13 yo trying for a Harlequin book.

    Ch 1 1
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    Love Magnet
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    ever since what? Rephrase

    Britney wanted to start her senior high school life right. She desired to meet new friends aside from her old friends: Tom and Sasha. They have been classmates since kindergarten.  Tom was a smart boy, he helped them with their homework in Mathematics. Sasha was the charming one, who loved joining beauty pageants. In fact, she was a yearly sight in their school's beauty contests. Unfortunately, the crown was elusive for Sasha. She never won even a single title ever since.
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    She lay down. lied is past tense of telling an untruth

    Britney yawned, sleep beckoned her to bed anew. She felt her eyes shutting down again. She returned to bed and lied down. She would have gone back to sleep if only it was not the first day of school. But it was the first day of school. She needed to be there on time. 
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    Love Magnet
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    taking?

    They walked behind the receptionist desk and smiled at the two young women that were busy talking calls.
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    Let Me Shine
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    He knows Ray?

    He was feared by almost all in the underworld and his favor was desired by many. Very few families were more powerful than them in the underworld, from what Francesca understood, it was only to the King of the Underworld that her brothers and father bowed down to.
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    Let Me Shine
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    starring* across?

    "A little advice Francesca, never let your competitors know how you are truly doing." Alvin said with a laugh as they continued to walk down the hall. "Their manager has less experience than me and has handled less popular artists that's why she's so excited to boast about this role. It's just a commercial. It's not like you'll be staring across Eric Chan."
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    Let Me Shine
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    Her acting teacher

    Francesca didn't know if she was a bad or a good actress, all of her attempts to join the industry had always been blocked by the family, thus making it difficult to gauge her skill. He acting teacher said she was amazing, but to Francesca that didn't count since she was paid to praise rich young children to encourage them.
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    Let Me Shine
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    she led them

    "Girls, girls, what's going on here?" A manager from Lights Entertainment asked. "Nevermind. I'm sure you're having fun with your new friend but you need to stay focused. Come, it's your turn soon." The manager said as she let the group of actresses over to a different room.
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    Let Me Shine
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    Then who

    "The who?" Ian asked. 
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Replied to Lord_Gr1mm

    Clichés are truisms. Especially being raised to be sold for the family, I understand why Adrianna wants to succeed by her own talents. Of course, there will always be those saying a person couldn't do things without being favored. Especially a pretty woman.

    "No, not yet. I made a promise to my wife." Cedric said simply.
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  • Karen_Armadillo_6562
    Karen_Armadillo_65621yr
    Commented

    Nobody thinks he and his wife and child are entitled to ANY privacy?! He was born to money, so his life is public property?

    "No, not yet. I made a promise to my wife." Cedric said simply.
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