Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as Thor!

please don't drop it is very good.

Thanks to *Angel_Extinction* for posting information about ROR Thor in case anyone has no idea of his power!!!

In my opinion, the story is ok, while the start is a cliche due to how many times it's been done. One of the main problems that i had was that there was no clear reason given for the friendship between Rhea and Frigga. You could have completely skipped that bit and put in text about how she was worried about Odin considering that the chief deity was killed by kronos. Or worried that he would get injured because he was distracted by breasts to subtly put in dxd theme because everything here is lewd. Two, why did odin, the chief deity of Asgard and the nine realms personally went to past greece. Odin is a very important person with only a few rivalling him, for him to personally go there is just weird it would be better to say that some minor gods would be sent there to determine kronos stance towards foreign pantheons. Besides even that Odin or anyone from asgard shouldn't even be going towards the past greece. Considering that due to the death of their fathre, the entire pantheon can fracture apart, they should be waiting to see if kronos can actually consilidate his father's territory before sending a deplomatic party. Thirdly, this is DxD, i repeat DxD, this world is lewd. Not just that these are gods, thus they will behave differently from humans. The entire interaction between odin and frigga is bland. Frigga is yelling at Odin and Odin is just accepting that for what reason. Not just that you have to specify exactly where they are talking, is this in their personal rooms, then yes but outside. No way, Odin is an All-father, Frigga talking to him like this is questioning his authority in plain view of his subjects. Instead you should have had frigga acting more dignified and curious over the baby as she should sense the power coming from him. Also, Odin is Odin when he is coming back to Asgard, there should atleast be something like a parade or a greeting in the throne room to welcome him back. For their, conversation, you should have them both acting seriously before in the end Odin leads their conversation into a lwed punchline or something like that and devolving from a digninfeid look into a perverted face while giggling. This is just my opinion, i hope you can take my criticism and improve on as a writer but if you find it insulting or offensive then just ignore it.

Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait to see how it unfolds. 'Thor can bee seen carrying a gigantic divine hammer, Mjölnir, and two divine gloves, Járngreipr.' -Will he use any of these?

Its perfect in my opinion.

That was a great start, keep it up, you're doing a good job!!

Doesnt Ragnarok! Thor Have Planet Class Destruction Power? :D

cliche

hey could someone create a story about record of ragnarok

when thor becomes strong enough give him the power of space and time

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS

Probably the worst start of a reincarnation story I have read so far.

Amigo tenías que poner al shumatsu no valquirie bueno tiene su diseño lo atmito pero en DxD no le encaja bueno es solo una opinión personal jajaja porlomenos no creo que le metas el mega martillo de ese Thor jajjaj por qué se ve ridículo el martillo

You talking about the mcu Thanos? Yeah I reckon the dxd verse can defeat him but the comic verse is on a whole another level with the likes of Molecule Man, Phoenix Force, Beyonder, Galactus and Thanos roaming around.

Thanks for chapter

Love the novel so far.

nice.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍