FateDevilAce
i like this novel and even this chapter . so i want to give a advice and i hope it doesn't offend the author. in the last few chapters there were some problems with continuity between chapters. it isn't a problem when there is 3 , 4 a month of difference between chapters. however in this chapter it was just the next day after the last chapter and the chapter begins talking about something fun about a letter that the reader doesn't have a idea about and just at the end of the chapter you can be sure it is challenge letter. this is problematic because the reader is unsure what happened and begin thinking if he lost a chapter or didn't pay attention instead of enjoying this wonderful novel. all this can be avoided if the end of last chapter Kilian though : "i am going to send a challenge letter to him" or something similar or in the beginning of the chapter instead of just letter the expression challenge letter was used. well this is my suggestion. i hope it helps since i want to keep reading this novel.
thanks for the chapter man I love this book so much and I wish many more people that love cultivation novels like me could read this book, and author san I don't know how webnovel work but how come your book is not put up in competition and on the ranking system but a lot of terrible novels are on the ranking list, very few like yours deserve it. anyway realized I have not written a review so am going to do that real quick