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Comments of chapter undefined of Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Novelistnovelist
NovelistnovelistLv2Novelistnovelist

Man you don't have to make everything clear. Have you never heard of the saying " Show not tell" All the talking makes it worse. Don't you have faith in your readers. We shall conclude everything, don't conclude everything without letting us think ourselves.

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Waakaranai
WaakaranaiLv13Waakaranai

all I can say is... the chapter has been aptly named

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

mc talks too much.

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Mandeer
MandeerLv4Mandeer

Beautiful, well articulated chapter.

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Frost_Gunner
Frost_GunnerLv14Frost_Gunner

The chapter got the point across well, even diving into the ambiguous moral dilemma that can be created in situations like this. However, like an earlier comment stated the MC talks too much in this chapter. I feel that as intelligent as Nina is she would find the MC's understanding of the concepts he put forth a little weird, as he is supposed to have "just awakened" to these urges. Maybe instead of the MC going on a rant have some back and forth between the characters.

Liam_Carolla
Liam_CarollaLv1Liam_Carolla

I'm sorry if I missed it, but how old is Eren at the moment?

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Thank kindly for the chapter 😁 Went a bit monologuing again but since it was for a good cause I shall allow it 😂

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InquisitorCrusader
InquisitorCrusaderLv15InquisitorCrusader

gatdam!

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Zuzu15
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_DaRK_MiST_
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Author why you extended it to far!

PUERKO_Senpai
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prasetyo
prasetyoLv10prasetyo

ntr detected

ahs333
ahs333Lv4ahs333

wow

uvp87459
uvp87459Lv3uvp87459

thanks for the chapter