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Comments of chapter undefined of Magus of the Wizarding World

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

the first chapter in the whole story with some conversation... the author is leaving a lot of holes with this, I've even forgotten who his friends are!! if he doesn't find out he's in marvel at this point i'll drop the story!! and why put so many nerfs on mc??(I know it's supposed to be stronger in the future, but it's already annoying) the author can't even control the growth of his own character! it was much simpler to make an OP character than to nerf him every 5 chapters

Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4Ashmodai

So if you break your arm, you got nerfed? XD

Castiel0123
Castiel0123Lv12Castiel0123

I hope he starts to collect information about the world around him after this debacle. I mean he is not been very attentive to his surroundings could get him killed and he is in Freaking MARVEL where gods pop up just on a whim just give bad day.

Sakra95
Sakra95Lv2Sakra95

Yeah I am leaving the story here. What was the purpose of exposing himself to Sirius? To gain his trust? That could have been done later when he escaped too. If Sirius starts thinking even a little he would realize how crazy it is that a fourteen year old broke into Azkaban. Its too suspicious. And if he speaks about it to Dumbledore and the Order later the MC will be treated with a lot of suspicion about what he was doing in Azkaban in his fourth year.

kuokyo
kuokyoLv5kuokyo

The mc keeps doing stupid things.

WOL1F
WOL1FLv13WOL1F

Mc just knows about the wizarding world and he didn't watch marvel things ever like just three movies or the one who reincarnated him just deleted the stuff that's marvel related from his memory idk?

GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3GawkGawk

you are good at ruining stories author-san

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank for good chapter.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

Couldve still snuck him out and his him. I keep seeing sentences with the words all flipped around throughout the story. Dyslexia?

RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

Thanks for the chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

Noah_Starrysky
Noah_StarryskyLv4Noah_Starrysky

❤️😍❤️👍

system
systemLv4system

Thanks for the chapter author san 😊 please keep up the good work 😃

Arsene_Holmes
Arsene_HolmesLv1Arsene_Holmes

Thanks for the chapter

Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

Have you considered having Nicholas Flamel help with making a fix for his damaged soul. Or maybe creating a runic defense and grabbing the deathly hollow with Riddle’s horcux in the Guant shack?

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter

coldpyr0
coldpyr0Lv14coldpyr0

I like that the MC is taking charge now, but this chapter could use a second or third proof read. So many spelling, grammar, and wrong word issues this chapter compared to previous chapters.

Dical
DicalLv11Dical

Thanks for the chapter

SsIribas
SsIribasLv3SsIribas

Gracias por el capítulo 😃