Capt_mermain1
I really looked hard for any "s" at the end of the myriad of 3rd person verbs scattered across this chapter, but I couldn't find any. I came here after reading 80 chapters of the second fanfic of the author and I was surprised to see some reviews going nuts about the grammar and I thought to myself "Come on guys, it cannot possibly be that bad, the other book its relatively clean, don't be exaggerated", but now sadly I understand why some people felt the need to vent like that.. D: