Comments of chapter undefined of Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
Guiltythree
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I came here because Shadow Slave is one of my favourites and so well written, and this was truly a masterpiece but I have to admit that although an amazing ending itself I still find myself curious as to the significance of the golden pyramid and that question, additionally I really wanted to believe that Matt was the wraith that was immune to the disease but the ending was still masterfully created and I’ll just go on being sad that we’ll never see a world where wraiths are cured.
well, thanks author for creating this masterpiece... but I don't why, I just find there's smth missing about the ending, it left me unsatisfied... I really enjoyed this novel, and I hope in the future you will continue it even if it is for one chapter a month... Thanks again, I think I will go see your other novel, and I hope the romance their or the story won't disappoint me like this... I'm always picky about romance...
A sad ending for Mat. it's understandable as you (author) the book isn't getting much attention. however this was an incredible story arguably better than shadow slave. maybe only advantage of shadow slave is the comedy which you don't find it in this novel for example the only reason I found out of shadow slave was that it was recommended. by web novel so I steamrolled though the book. clearly from what I see it's climbing the ranks quickly. p.s guilty3 before I found shadow slave I had 800ish coins. (I bought these coins last year). Now I have less than 200 all in the last 2-3 weeks
i loved this novel so much. Thank you for writing it! love novels where no one is painted as evil, just both sides having sad circumstances. Wish it wouldnt end, but I understand. This novel will now always have a special place in my heart. just wanted to say how talented you are as a writer, making me feel these things, haha.
