Comments of chapter undefined of Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)

Pfff..that was a heavy chapter. But I guess this is what stories are all about, steering up certain feelings in the reader. This did it 100%. The only thing that makes me sadder than this chapter, is that so few seem to have actually read it.

what a heartbreaking chapter, i cried it's been a long time since I read something like that, so many emotions, it's hard to describe the feeling right now, but oh man... my heart hurt... 💔💔

What a good chapter and how painful. This novel has achieved in a few chapters what many others have not been able to, it has been a long time since I cried with a novel, in fact it is the second time I do it, the other novel that has made me cry is TBATE. Thanks for the chapter.

Not often you cry by chapter 26 :c

i cried

Hard to describe what this chapter made me fee… something like very very viscous and heavy stress and sadness, with some mornful overtones

Reading and crying at the same time is no easy task... but i am managing 🥲

sigh.... My tears are sweating.

😭

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Loving the story but u need to proofread and fix your spelling and grammical errors

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Caramba..... quase chorei com isso mano

Oh man... this really got me hard

oh, oh jeez, that was a rough one

👍😁

I literally need to take a break to gather my emotions after reading this. You are such a gifted writer. Very few writers can paint such vivid pictures & evoke such rich emotions, while also creating a completely original story.

This him sending her away and packingthings for her makes me rememberhow it felt making the decision to euthanise our cat. But instead of feeling heavy, after our cat went to be cremated i felt so light it was nauseating, like i could barely stop myself from floating to the ceiling. And euthanasia is basically what is happening here