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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Rise Of The Raijin

TheRedMoon
TheRedMoonLv4TheRedMoon

memories erased i'm out

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Herohero
HeroheroLv3Herohero

why you weakened him (already he had long-term wishes which at the beginning will not be very useful to him but the memory stroke is annoying, I stay because he at least has the basis of his situation in one piece but at my opinion if you are going to make it lose its advantage of knowing the original story you should have done just a full Oc.)đŸ˜đŸ˜¶

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WeedGodking
WeedGodkingLv4WeedGodking

This god is really weak The first wish is a place to go too But this god won’t grant this dude a free place to go to To me he only got two wish because i don’t see a point of wishing a place to go to if you a god you could be granted for it for free

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Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

He should totally steal the lightning fruit by killing Enel

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BloodCleaver
BloodCleaverLv5BloodCleaver

Really wanna not read this because of the memory thing being a huge turnoff as it stops being a "person reincarnated into this world" fic and more of a "I gave this random guy in this world these powers" fic. The third raikage bloodline thing is too unique though so I gotta read a bit more.

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Amari_f
Amari_fLv4Amari_f

when i saw the lick for the story i immediately thought of a male herscher of thunder lol

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Zachariah_Browning
Zachariah_BrowningLv4Zachariah_Browning

He should get a Mythical Zoan devil Fruit that would be better for him. He should use Fuinjutsu on his ships rooms to make them giant

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ogre3000
ogre3000Lv5ogre3000

Shadow clones and you can learn everthing while training your body

Wrath_Envy
Wrath_EnvyLv1Wrath_Envy

dropped chapter one and already a disappointment who writes about reincarnated MCs that got their memories nerfed, like what make reincarnated fanfics interesting and enjoyable are because of what the MC's of them can do with all their knowledge

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Theodoric_Jager
Theodoric_JagerLv13Theodoric_Jager

Will he get the Goro Goro no Mi? I mean it will be smart, since it will be best with his bloodline and all. If he brings a basket full of all types of fruits, kills Enel, then the Goro Goro no Mi can transform into one of the fruits.

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Sau11
Sau11Lv14Sau11

thx for chapter

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KoRSito
KoRSitoLv4KoRSito

The story looks promising by using the 3rd raikage as a base. since I imagined a kind of tanned Garp using Rays, rokushiki and haki ... but doing it a typical "shinobi" that will use fire, wind, water, senbon or shuriken jutsus ... meh

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OnlyGoodStuff_1
OnlyGoodStuff_1Lv13OnlyGoodStuff_1

thanks for the chapter

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paz
pazLv2paz

👍👍👍

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King_Kay
King_KayLv4King_Kay

Marine Or Pirate ? Strongest in the World, World Peace or Pirate KING

King_Crosjalle
King_CrosjalleLv3King_Crosjalle

wha

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Lord_Bell
Lord_BellAuthorLord_Bell

Another picture of our MC

Lord_Bell
Lord_BellAuthorLord_Bell

A picture of our MC

Thiago_Gomes_8808
Thiago_Gomes_8808Lv4Thiago_Gomes_8808

Obrigado pelo capitulo