Please don't drop it. I won't be able to continue supporting you due to Webnovel's new policy on Fast Pass. You have a perfect story that'll be pretty successful once more people find it
I like the story. Just need to pay attention to the paragraphs. It has gotten much better, but there are lots of mistakes of words not being capitalized, no periods on the end of a sentence, and even the occasional word just completely missed.
Honestly I enjoy different this story as oppose how the norm is all the other Webnovels are. Continue your work is really good and it shows tremendous results so far
Thanks for the chapter! Dont drop the novel i love how you blended together kingdom building and cultivation together. Just ignore those hatful comments.đđ
Yeah Um loving the novel too and so far its great you jsut need to be carful With how you add in the other planets and maybe give robin some setbacks as he hasnt had to many losses
Very good story, some typos here and there, but nothing too important. I'm quite disapointed about the whole now planet thingy, i don't rly see the point of kingdom building if u leave it miday, but i hope i'll be proven wrong.