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Comments of chapter undefined of Lord of the Truth

Jack_Slayer_1972
Jack_Slayer_1972Lv2Jack_Slayer_1972

though I fear this won't end well😔

SwordCreator
SwordCreatorLv15SwordCreator

lets go Robin has some backbone

Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv3Everythingonurmind

2 chapters in and we don't know anything about the mc journey till here except that he is a cynical egoist

LeFraud_James23
LeFraud_James23Lv3LeFraud_James23

The story is great. I don't have any problems with grammar or vocabulary, but I think we need a bit of improvement in the punctuation, such as eclipsis, periods, the of capital letters, etc. This is not a huge issue, however.

GerminalLeader
GerminalLeaderLv2GerminalLeader

Let's go Robin of the Hood. Catch em those major laws.

FangYuan69
FangYuan69Lv2FangYuan69

اجعل له زوجة في بداية حياته

LI3I57_
LI3I57_Lv13LI3I57_

nice:)

GODKINGASH
GODKINGASHLv13GODKINGASH

Nice

Mobashir_Ayaz
Mobashir_AyazLv1Mobashir_Ayaz

interesting so far

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍