Comments of chapter undefined of Lord of the Truth

lets go Robin has some backbone

2 chapters in and we don't know anything about the mc journey till here except that he is a cynical egoist

The story is great. I don't have any problems with grammar or vocabulary, but I think we need a bit of improvement in the punctuation, such as eclipsis, periods, the of capital letters, etc. This is not a huge issue, however.

اجعل له زوجة في بداية حياته

though I fear this won't end well😔

nice:)

Nice

interesting so far

thanks for the chapter 👍