Comments of chapter undefined of Lord of the Truth

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Veritas_Lv14Veritas_

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

2mth

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The_Charred_OneLv11The_Charred_One

English isn't you native language? HOW You're better at it than almost every other English author

2yr

_Jo1Jo2Jo3Kurdi_Lv10_Jo1Jo2Jo3Kurdi_

I hate the father already he is just using his son. So tge Mc if he has half a brain would hate his father for neglecting his mom. And the Familie Elders would punish the father rather then giving him a hight position. This makes no sense and is stupid

2yr

_Jo1Jo2Jo3Kurdi_Lv10_Jo1Jo2Jo3Kurdi_

Author there are some sentences that were like this ,,meanwhile.....,, even though it was a new sentence, so it would begin with a big M: ,,Meanwhile......,,

2yr

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Liam_Hunt_0618Lv4Liam_Hunt_0618

Although you say English isn't your native language, you have a good way with words. Of course, there are some mistakes here and there, but they don't break the flow of reading, so it's fine I'd say. And with writing on, you will for sure get better and better at it. About the story ... At first it didn't get me, but when experiencing the obviously bad relationship to his father, it sparked my interest. So for now, I'll definitely continue reading. By the way, it was a little bit hard to me to imagine the world the story is playing in especially in regards to political affairs. But I believe it should become clearer with time. Anyway, good work so far. Keep it up.

1yr