Thank you for correcting me. I have been mistaken in this case indeed. That doesn't excuse your rude behaviour, however.

I still like reading your novel. And I've got the feeling I want to finish it, means it is good in my opinion. The only flaw I can see so far are some minor mistakes in writing, but else it appears to be a well-conceived story. Definitely keep up the good work.

I think one "by" needs to be removed.

Comma before "Maya" would be good.

"his hand" instead of "her hand"

I think there is something wrong with this sentence.

It was somewhat confusing for me to follow the dialogue with so many characters appearing all of a sudden. But I still enjoyed reading, and overall this chapter is also well done. Keep it up.

I like your writing style so far. It's not too difficult to understand, yet uses some nice vocabulary and sentence structure, just perfect in my opinion. And how you tell the story is good as well. I have to admit I got really interested in your novel after reading the synopsis, and I'm not disappointed at all by the first chapter. I hope it goes on like that. No matter what, keep on writing, and all the best.

I'm glad she wasn't, since that woman appeared to be a despicable one. And I could imagine, his love is a great woman. Anyway, I really wonder now: Where is Maya Miller? Ha, what a nice cliffhanger.

Haha, just was about to say the same, but you already did. Nice one.

"except" instead of "excep"

Thank you for the motivation.

Yeah, it was about time, I guess. Thank you for your comments and also the power stones by the way. I appreciate that, and makes me happy.

Ha, "Mundus." Exactly how the world is named in the current fantasy novel I try to write. Somehow made me smile to see that you use this name as well. What a nice coincidence.

Very well-conveived chapter in my opinion, and I like the way how you introduce the world the story is playing in to your reader. Despite some minor mistakes in writing, good work. Keep it up.

Haha, that's quite the thing to say. Made me feel like sticking around just to see how you'll achieve that.

I like how you described the fight between Coy and Luna. Furthermore, most of the dialouges are well made in my opinion as well as the implementation of the different characters' thoughts. I'm personally not that interested in the plot but I'm impressed by your way with words and it feels like I could improve my own writing by reading yours. Nicely done.

Sure, you are welcome. Please feel free to ask whenever a question appears. And thank you.

I'm glad you like it. Unfortunately, I didn't create it on my own. In the introduction part you can see where I found it. But I made the cover for "Solace in Darkness".