Pham_Minh_Khue
complimenti storia ben scritta. mi dispiace che non prosegue- da ROMA ciaoo
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nice start look forward to see how the novel develops
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Ivar had broken legs but he can walk with crutches. Here your MC hasn't legs. Is it really good for the story?
This is great, Khue!
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oh, a cripple huh?