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nice start look forward to see how the novel develops
Ivar had broken legs but he can walk with crutches. Here your MC hasn't legs. Is it really good for the story?
This is great, Khue!
complimenti storia ben scritta. mi dispiace che non prosegue- da ROMA ciaoo
oh, a cripple huh?
