Comments of chapter undefined of Altering Skyrim

Ulfric allying with vampires and necromancers, the scum of society, to gain his throne? Of course. If he wants to reign in a very short period of time it's a good idea to take power over the humans/nords by force. But for the long term? Absolutely not. I think having a three-party confrontation without any alliances between the three would make more sense and would also require more tactics to not get attacked in the back by another group.

I don't quite see how the MC limited the progress of the dragonborn, he only traveled with her briefly (dragon attack, solitary ball, late support during Alduin's first attack) and then gave her provided I don't quite see how the MC limited the progress of the dragonborn, he only traveled with her briefly (one dragon attack, Solitude ball, late support during Alduin's first attack) and then gave her provided max level equipment at the last moment for the final confrontation. I find that on the contrary the MC let it develop on its own without pampering it.max level equipment at the last moment for the final confrontation. I find that on the contrary the MC let it develop on its own without pampering it.

It was a good chapter, the reason he didn't participate in the Battle was acceptable it wouldn't exist in the games but here it worked well. About finishing the novel in the next chapter I think it's too fast, I accept the ending after this battle, then you show the results of it and the alduim when dragonborne returns and it can end with at least skyrim under the command of the restored. There would be a lot left out that could be covered in the novel, especially the elves, but you can leave it open, maybe you get the inspiration for a second season later.

I see... This fills me with a feeling of emptiness... Thanks to you for this wonderful novel, I hope we meet again in another of your works!

I don't think canon Ulfric would ally with Harkon and other undead no matter what. Not because he's somehow a good person, but it goes against all his values and there is no basis for trust. My bet is he's mind controlled or something. Maybe the Illusion Skilled?

despite everything, it somehow still feels like "canon", because in my many hours and playthroughs of Skyrim, the amount of times I even reached the blade's temple can be counted in one hand, and the times I killed Alduin, 1 might be even too much...

preach it brother, that is the truth. awesome chapter as always and u got my support, hopefully u have plans for a new story after this , maybe a one piece or fairytail one :P but I wish u all the best and to a good ending

I know this is literally practically the end but it be cool if you did something with the heart of lorkhan since it was mentioned in the discerning the transmundane quest and I think it would have a neat interaction with the energy of the eye of magnus in his arm.

As bludvein said, i dont think ulfric would want to ally himself with the vampires for the life of him. hes a racist fool who sees violent is the only way to free skyrim but thats all the more reason for him not to side with them. he started the rebellion to "save" skyrim and her people after all. that is unless he's under some powerful illusion magic magic that even his court mage can't detect. it would be fun if he hid. what will rictus do? will he kill ulfric or try to save and capture him. Is ulfric under the vampire seduction spell? i suspect the skilled in illusion is a vampire who started in morthal making his illusion skill much stronger. plus a fight between illusion and alteration would be hype to see. one controls the mind, and the other controls reality also, im sad that this gem of a fanfic is ending soon but i'm also glad that i found this a week ago! i also wanted to ask whatever happend to erik the slayer? did he joined the restored? if so did rictus gain the bonus abilities having another skilled under him. In truth i personally would love if this novel would continue in 2-3 chapter more but mr author, you do you it is your story after all and i thank you for making it be a part of my life. i just hope you make the end as open for a sequel as possible. we never know when you'll have a sudden inspiration. Once again mr author, thank you!

you should have the main character unlock CHIM, which means becoming self aware to being a fictional character and not losing his individuality and becoming a God like how Talos did

I think you made the right decision for yourself and your story. While it did feel rushed, I enjoyed the moment of panic Sanguine felt at the fourth wall break. I can't wait for this next chapter

Sad to think this story will come to an end soon but it was fun while it lasted thank you for your time and effort I can’t wait to see the finale!

Thank you for the great chapter and have my power stone!

Hope Rictus becomes high king he got the support of a good chuck of the jarls.

It's fine, I was honestly more invested in Rictus's story than the Dragonborn's.

I say Soul Trap Ulfric and his supporters. Send them to the Soul Cairn. That should teach them.

Thanks for the chapter

My biggest disappointment is the fact they are in a programed game. Just broke the immersion.

I think you made the right call here.