this is the epitome of brain dead trash, author needs to go commit suicide to reedem the the common sense of the world . that is how bad this shit is , best to be deleted, the sheer fact it got approved here is a disserver to webnovel, author kill urself

your not rushing, instead your dragging it out wit 0 visible progress

absolutelyt agree

another wasted chapter,

this was basically a waste of words, a full out right filler with no info dump or meaning

the blunder here is insane, not even 2 chapters or 3 days into the academy and u start spars ?,. there is no teaching happening, no context this is very very badly built up, kinda like a Chinese fiction piece, which I'm sorry to say is very very poorly designed

Chapters are awesome, but this is my greed talking, need more

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first big mistake in the story a very glaring mistake, he is reborn as an infant, he reaches planet and suddenly he grows up ?

it is the dragon ball world so obviously that gets a 5/5 but for the rest ? in the words of the great chef Gordan ramsay " what an absolute fucking mess" " Its a steaming pile of garbage"

It was an awesome story, hoping to see it continued in a part two dragonball Super : Kai Raditz

Need Meridia to show up

stick multiple leaves to the body and do exercises, chakra flow to ain't train body and do a body stand or puch up on a finger with chakra as balancing point

this falls flat right at the absolute very start, unless u plan on saying this is an AU htne the political crap ur pulling rght there is BS cause its shown straight in the show, rias was no where near composed and wat the fck will politics matter when all that matters is strenght

honestly for a reincarnated person, with full background knowledge of fairytale and having a modified version of the gamer ability, the MC is retarded as f***k, you are aware of the dangers, you have a path a head you have the method to grind, and you have makrov and now u introduced mavis to help and yet he goes around half assed like he is king, if this isn't retarded then I don't know what is, I can understand not being op from start but not properly training is where I find the stupidity from, he almost no different from d class mages and he wants to interfere in canon, for that matter cannon has to go shit at a point after all when a butterfly flaps its wings there will be a hurricane on the otherside of the world

one of the best ideas for chakra reserves is the 8 hidden gates, if u remember the dragon ball z episode where goku and gohan mastered super saiyan they could remain in that form indefinitely, mastery of the gates with near perfect chakra control should allow access to keep gate open and as it flows, mc's on reserves will increase, just a thought tho

why spear, either use a short sword, or katana or go pure martial arts, or use kunai, spear is too long and kinda goes against ninja

Unless you are the "the lost samurai" from fanfiction, this is a robbery of anothers work with out even giving credit where its due please either confirm you are infact The lost samurai, or give credit where its due

like in dragon ball z, where before the fight with cell, goku and gohan mastered super saiyan to the point it become a natural form for them, do the same to sasuke but with the gates, increase control and slowly allow it go till the with gate which is shown by lee

so ppl regardless of maybe naruto s class or fairytail s class or dxd satan. god , super devil which are just titels, the above classification shows their destructive and defense capabilities in their most truest and honest sense so a base line human can be considered a TIER 0 being , and weps can be used as well like the Hiroshima nuke can be classified as a TIER 3 weapon , as an example ultimate class beings in dxd can destroy cities or tank attacks of similar destruction so that can be classified as TIER 3 beings etc