Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as a Dothraki (GOT SI) [haitus]

The ki was already a bit over done... Bringing a Haki user from another universe in... Im this close to dropping it...

Sorry to say it, but doing it is a big mistake .......

well, i bet that when he reach westeros, naruto will be king and the prince of dorne will be keanu reeves.

Nah, im out. Completely ruined the story dynamic when there wasn't any need for it. Author clearly just adding random characters....next week magneto is coming and will wipe the entire Westeros armies with a flick of the finger killing them with their own swords.

Well that whas something i didint expect

I slept on this thought for a night in order to not be too hasty with my judgement, and, after careful consideration, my opinion is that you should delete this chapter entirely and pretend like it never happened. Introducing the Chi was already way inappropriate and I guess most readers were OK with that only because your first and third wish were extremely underwhelming (the ring should have been space magic and the disease immunity should have included magic immunity to make them decent) and we gave you a pass because the MC desperately needed a way to get better and fast at that in order to be prepared to shine once canon started, but you obviously interpreted it the wrong way and assumed it was fine to go completely ballistic and totally wreck the power level of the setting which should never be done post production but only as a premise (meaning the MC should have known it was AU and be able to wish accordingly) also his aversion to magic its irrational and the fact that he didn't account for it in his wishes its a great oversight that was ignored by the readers because you needed some kind of "risk" besides the Night King to motivate the MC's development and give him some challenges but now that you opened the flood gates to literally anything, the whole premise and expectations are completely obliterated and 95%+ of the readers myself included won't stand for it.

tbh I like this only because it's shanks ... if it was anyone else it might have ruined it story... if u repeat thus in the future please select carefully

Good job you Just ruined this story for 80% of the people reading

I'm out this is not GOT anymore

I can understand using a bit of AU but crossing over with someone like shanks from one piece is gonna to destroy the power structure of your story. That man can slice mountains in half with a swing of his sword and u put him in a weak universe like game of thrones. In my opinion it doesn’t really suit it in this story

Ehh no. Bye D:

This can go either way to be honest.

MC will find godzilla egg instead of dragon, final fight will be king of the night summoning undead goku against MC's 30,000 meter purple godzilla

Dropped

This fanfic is becoming crazier. 3 wish? fine... Qi? seriously? okay cause there is Yi Ti bases on China... Shanks? Sorry dude, this is not how it is work on GOT... GOT and One Piece is different for God sake... What the use of Sserum if you have Qi and also haki?

Unexpected surprise but a welcome one.

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bye

I dont know if should drop or just wait to see what happens ff like these can go either way but hopefully you will do a better job or just scratch the idea

Great Chap, keep up the awesome work 😍