I asked you if you were going to work on the grammar, but it seems like you lied. No effort was put in to make this readable. Just copy and paste from FF. smh
Hey man can you look over the work and edit. Spelling and grammar has degraded a lot. I don't know of you're just copying the original but at least work on the spelling.
oh god well there's is nothing stopping him from returning by death tho don't know how far it would take him back but now he can plan for what roswall would do in the future better and i hope he gets the full memories from arthur but i don't know if that's the direction this is going in
Thanks for the great chapter!
But please author-sama, let me know when you're going to have a POV change, without it it's very easy to get lost in the story.