I like the story, but punctuation makes it harder to read. There are too many commas in some places (can be replaced with different punctuation) and commas are missing in other places. I'd recommend getting an editor. It would really help out your writing.
I'm really loving this novel, although it's just the 1st chapter but the author did a good job.
Especially as the mc isn't a complete loser at the bottom of the barrel as we mostly see in weak to strong mc novels and he also has good friends.
Thanks for the chapter!
I know from my experience on reading a lot of novels, that most probably these guys gonna get ambushed by beasts and he will get a lucky break!
Mmmhmm.....but then again creation is hard, but please keep cliches to the minimum...
a good starting point but authorr, can you spare a page for power levels? I mean I still don't know the diff between cores and levels and the appropriate power levels