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Comments of chapter undefined of Aether Beasts

DrakeDaDragon
DrakeDaDragonLv14DrakeDaDragon

I like the story, but punctuation makes it harder to read. There are too many commas in some places (can be replaced with different punctuation) and commas are missing in other places. I'd recommend getting an editor. It would really help out your writing.

Voidsaint
VoidsaintLv3Voidsaint

I'm really loving this novel, although it's just the 1st chapter but the author did a good job. Especially as the mc isn't a complete loser at the bottom of the barrel as we mostly see in weak to strong mc novels and he also has good friends.

SomeOnE
SomeOnELv2SomeOnE

I'm just throwing this here. This is just a picture I found on the net. I don't know if it matches the author's head.

Harlyboy
HarlyboyLv3Harlyboy

amazing

B3RS3RK3R
B3RS3RK3RLv15B3RS3RK3R

good writing so far i keep Reading[img=recommend]

BattleKing10000
BattleKing10000Lv5BattleKing10000

Thanks for the chapter I'm just coming from your summoning Fic

ARTMavak
ARTMavakLv3ARTMavak

I read your other work author and I'm excited for this one so keep up the good work

Khush_Gupta_2309
Khush_Gupta_2309Lv2Khush_Gupta_2309

a nice one..

Lilhannah
LilhannahLv11Lilhannah

seems imma have to keep reading, kinda getting excitedXD

Hirak_Barua
Hirak_BaruaLv15Hirak_Barua

Thanks for the chapter! I know from my experience on reading a lot of novels, that most probably these guys gonna get ambushed by beasts and he will get a lucky break! Mmmhmm.....but then again creation is hard, but please keep cliches to the minimum...

puremichigan
puremichiganLv15puremichigan

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puremichigan
puremichiganLv15puremichigan

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EDnave
EDnaveLv15EDnave

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EDnave
EDnaveLv15EDnave

I wonder what his element will be? not wind or metal I think.

puremichigan
puremichiganLv15puremichigan

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puremichigan
puremichiganLv15puremichigan

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Chips_fanatic
Chips_fanaticLv15Chips_fanatic

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shockfoxx
shockfoxxLv14shockfoxx

I hope she doesn't have a super tragic backstory.

Enticement
EnticementLv14Enticement

a good starting point but authorr, can you spare a page for power levels? I mean I still don't know the diff between cores and levels and the appropriate power levels

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

Good first chapter, gave a well good first impression. Thanks for the chapter dude, much love~