Author pls come back 🙏🙏🙏

This novel is so basic. like the thousand other outcast young from a rich family who becomes a mercenary and has medical skills. no originality. Even the types of women are the same. Plus there's clearly some kind of chinese national superiority complex and racism against black people? The only plus for this story is that it's well translated with no grammar or spelling errors that I could easily notice.

This novel has a lot of potential, but the amount of grammar and spelling errors bug me like crazy. Also, the lack of explanations and a bunch of mistakes makes me so confused. Honestly, the story doesn't really flow well.

This novel is insanely good. It's so dark, and there's a lot of messed up stuff, but I can't stop reading. I do wish the r-18 scenes came more frequently, and there was more build-up to them, but other than that, this novel is amazing.

I previously wrote a review saying that this novel was too similar to another, but after reading further, the differences grew by a lot so I took down the old review. The story starts off a little rough, but the plot gets a lot better after the first 100 chapters. One thing I wish was done better however, is development of side characters. There are too many women, way too quickly, and not much about them is known. R-18 scenes are also very 1 and done with a majority, which is disappointing.Slower introduction of new women, more scenes involving each one, and maybe some more details that would provide individuality to each woman would really improve the story.

Author, so just an idea since lux is getting a harem... how about adding his grandma to it? 🙈 Especially since she's gonna be younger looking after coming out of the coffin

this is the eighth novel I've read to the end and every one gave me severe heartbreak at the end when I realized the story was over 😭😭😭

since the author's other novel is still updating I guess this one ended after the locked chapters

did the book finish after the locked chapters or did something happen to the author?

I like the story, but punctuation makes it harder to read. There are too many commas in some places (can be replaced with different punctuation) and commas are missing in other places. I'd recommend getting an editor. It would really help out your writing.

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