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The Villainess's Revenge

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XOMatsumaeohana
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😄 A villainess book spotted! Opening had me hooked cause 😍 FIRE!!!

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Aysel_Inara
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- It's better to separate dialogue and narration. "Do you like it?" He asked her cheerfully. (NOT LIKE THIS) "Do you like it?" He asked her cheerfully. - (') apostrophe is used to display possession. It's mainly used to show that certain thing/emotion belong to the particular person. Anna's, Her's etc (Screams' is wrong)

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interesting, though the name and crown prince reminds me of Beware of Villainess

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Theim_Theim_San
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♥️I like it

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nagatoro
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Aysel_Inara
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- Avoid repeating the same information (opening scene of fire) - Avoid using HAD so much and unnecessarily

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Nik_Sam
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Nice

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Amy_Zing
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Crown prince is definitely trash alert !! Hopefully FL gets her revenge

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