Comments of chapter undefined of The Villainess's Revenge

😄 A villainess book spotted! Opening had me hooked cause 😍 FIRE!!!

- It's better to separate dialogue and narration. "Do you like it?" He asked her cheerfully. (NOT LIKE THIS) "Do you like it?" He asked her cheerfully. - (') apostrophe is used to display possession. It's mainly used to show that certain thing/emotion belong to the particular person. Anna's, Her's etc (Screams' is wrong)

interesting, though the name and crown prince reminds me of Beware of Villainess

♥️I like it

- Avoid repeating the same information (opening scene of fire) - Avoid using HAD so much and unnecessarily

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Nice

Crown prince is definitely trash alert !! Hopefully FL gets her revenge