Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Devil of the Seas
One Piece: The Devil of the Seas
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Author, I give these recommendations, that if you choose to apply them you can improve your novel. - If the destruction of ohara is very badly told in my opinion, and it is that if they are a group of scholars with such great knowledge, it is almost impossible that they did not have protection from a figure of peak power in the world of one piece For example big mon, she wants to be a pirate queen, and she needs the ability of the third pudding eye to wake up so she can read the ponegly, so it doesn't make sense that she doesn't know about ohara, or some of her children could have told her, And so ohara had her protection, since she can ask them to decipher the old language of the ponegly, and if bigmon does not convince you, it may be another figure of peak power who protects them, another pirate who is as strong as a yonkou but be lonely or only have a small group and do not have the influence of a yonkou, or some mafia from the underworld, either because they want to decipher the ancient history for revenge, knowledge, or some living relative there is, money, etc, even the same Dragon could protect them. - Thus the destruction of a place as important as Ohara would have more realism, the navy had to send an admiral or more, several vice admiral with initial admiral power, cp0-9, to face the one who protected them, giving a colossal battle, With the navy winning with great losses, Robin could escape thanks to that battle, in addition to the help she received from her friend, she might think that she is the only survivor, but the reality would be that several people from Ohara have survived thanks to the help from the one who protected them, who managed to retreat seriously injured, but Robin will never have contact with those who survived because it was not necessary. A "buster call" can be anticipated or inferred if you are a person of great power, because you have contacts, who can inform you that a large gathering of ships of this category are going to such an island. - There is also another point that the ponegly are, how indestructible? They can throw them into the sea, unless they can float because of the material they are made, they can also cover them with some substance so that they are no longer noticed, they pass as a large stone, etc, it would be almost impossible to find or identify them, or also gather all those you find and take them to the holy land, dig a hole and bury them, the only ones outside would be those that the government and navy did not find because they were very hidden, the who could find them would be those who have the ability to listen to all things, and for the rest that are hidden, the solution is that there is a support that would be in pages with what was taxed in the ponegly, they would be endless, the government could not confiscate them all, and most of the pirates and underworld would possess them, but since nobody can read them, they are for decoration, this could add more tragedy to robin, and more realism to the destruction of ohara, robi n her hunted everywhere for being the only one known to have survived the destruction of ohara.
