Comments of chapter undefined of HP: The Arcane Thief

At least he didn't "accidentally" crash into the Podium, crippling Bagman for life and leaving him to the mercy of the loan sharks and gambling goblins... author I'm giving you top tier ideas!!

Every time I start reading a new chapter, this is what it feels like.

Thx for the chapter

I hope to see a confrontation with the public about the news that the Valentinos lied about the engagement. Axel character is one of vengeance, so naturally he wont hurt the daughter but the rest of the lot must have a comuppance. Afterall, their actions could be considered line theft, public humiliation and as a added bonus is not what Axel wants. Either way letting them get away with something so underhanded and betraying his trust is an essential characteristic of his being. As of now only Daphne has managed to breach that exterior he excludes and even with her its barely (so far). My point being, for humiliating him and putting a girl he is interested in a unhealthy situation (Axel rightly holds himself responsible for his failings with Daphne) it does not hold true to the character to not return the favor. Maybe the finale of the TriWizard tournament might be the result. I cant imagine he will be happy when in the 2nd competition they use a hostage besides daphne. Also ludo is probably going to be turned inside out.

it feels so short nooooooooo

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the update 💮

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Thanks for the chappy.

Good comeback but Ludo is overdue a severe spanking. Still a great story. Wondering if/when Luna will show up again. Hope the Daphne situation doesnt last long. With him getting her memories back. Just depressing. Hate it when theres any kind of mind manip beyond minor stuff.

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