MayDreamer
Don't kill him so fast
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Nice turn of events
wow, that's fast 😐
very nice continue writing
I was starting to like Ashton. Let's hope that by some miracle he survives!
nice chapter
perfect ❣️❣️❣️
I noticed that there are quite a few paragraphs that need punctuations. It feels kinda off reading a long paragraph and realizing it should have been broken into sentences. There are also a few capitalization errors.
Let's see what happens next🤔
