Comments of chapter undefined of Shinigami's Quest.

Yeah some of the covos with all of them felt forced, but it's a really small part of the chapter so idrc. There is a problem that you have tho your POV changes are confusing, for example, there was a paragraph near the end where Odin was talking. But with no cuts/space it suddenly switched to Ichigo, so I got confused because I just read that Odin is thinking of introducing himself to Rossweisse. Only when I read the next 2 paragraph did it clear it up. Other than that tho, great chapter👌