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Comments of chapter undefined of Martial Arts System

Tom_caveman
Tom_cavemanLv15Tom_caveman

I started reading this as a break from the many other novels I’m currently reading obsessively. I knew it was completed and thought it is very short compared to the other novels. There were many typos and confusing times but the story progressed greatly til the last 70 or so chapters I started feeling like it was going downhill reading the authors comments I can understand now why it went down. I just hope that the author will return to this with new and fresh ideas that will reignite my desire to continue this story. The author managed to leave it off at a good spot where you are both sad and expectant of the return of Ichiro. So to the author I hope someday hopefully soon you will get the inspiration needed to continue this journey that has greatly surprised me.

NovaxD
NovaxDLv14NovaxD

saaaaaad. i really enjoy the world where this story takes place.. Hope we get more chapters some day

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Daoist_DarkMoon
Daoist_DarkMoonLv15Daoist_DarkMoon

Man that note at the end killed me. This is part of the reason why i stayed away from webnovels for so long as compared to a novel i buy at the store. It sucks hearing that an author isnt motivated to continue a story that you’ve enjoyed every sentence of. Hopefully one day this story gets the continuation it deserves, because it truly is a work of art.

BlackLotus_00
BlackLotus_00Lv13BlackLotus_00

My dude... I bought the max privilege just before yesterday...🥲. Well, whatever. Thank you so much for putting up with the pressure while making this beautiful novel and I hope you feel better soon!

K0D4S
K0D4SLv15K0D4S

That's unfortunate I was really enjoying this story. The idea and the world background is good. I was really hyped about him becoming Martial General and few seconds later really sad. Hope you will come back to this story soon. I will only enjoy white online for while now then.

Malraux
MalrauxLv11Malraux

Take care of your mental health man, all I want to say is that this novel has helped me get through some tough times. And even if it isn't your "masterpiece" this novel would always be kept at a special place in my heart.

GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14GifflarGod

I am a fan of the novel and I send this message to the author who is currently writing White Online. We are here, we are waiting!

GreatDreamImmortal
GreatDreamImmortalLv2GreatDreamImmortal

I don't like to comment about my opinion because I think it won't matter, but I just want to say that your story had made me laugh, cry and feel happy reading the story of Kurogami Ichiro even if you don't think so I see this novel as a masterpiece and I also felt that something was wrong with some of the chapters it's like you're writing it as a chore not as a something you like, I understand your feelings, but I hope after some time you will have new ideas and want to continue the story again in the near future, your fan here will await the continuation, and thanks for everything so far.

GUZ
GUZLv15GUZ

ksetiadi
ksetiadiLv15ksetiadi

Thanks for the work you've put in thus far author and looking forward to the next one 🙏

kenjiwind
kenjiwindLv15kenjiwind

this was literally my only reason to get on webnovel lately.

Kami_Sama16
Kami_Sama16Lv4Kami_Sama16

bro this is my favorite novel on this app hurry and bring it back

Karl_Cham
Karl_ChamLv14Karl_Cham

Sad, I really quite enjoyed reading this story. I quite liked reading it daily, but all things must come to an end. I just hope that you will continue it someday so I can look back to the time I spent and have a smile on my face, remembering the good memories I have of this story... I wish you well in the future and thank you for writing.

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaRLv14Ash4vaR

Nice plot till now but a I am a bit sad to hear u have postponed its completion. Though u say that ur other novel is much better than this I would like to disagree to that as I have read white online for a while, just before the treasure hunt event to be exact. For me white online is a good one and to my liking as I have always loved snipers but when I compare it to this one I wud say I love this more. It's basically because of the plot and the way the character is made, as a strong and prideful person. So I humbly request u to complete this wonderful work of urs in time when u get ur imaginative mind to work on it....

Brent_Lippincott
Brent_LippincottLv15Brent_Lippincott

this is the second story in two days thats left unfinished not same author thankfully but as a writer I know what it's like to lose the passion for your own story. after awhile you get tired of seeing the same thing again and again in your mind and it burns the drive away i hope some day it will be rekindled.

lambo_32
lambo_32Lv15lambo_32

Take all the time you need I completely understand. it is hard and I did really enjoy this story. take care and come back when you're ready.

Akindia_Mc_Collin
Akindia_Mc_CollinLv11Akindia_Mc_Collin

I literally feel like crying rn but I appreciate your telling us, I really enjoyed this story and looked forward to new chapters everyday but I now know your struggles. Hope you do well for yourself and maybe one day you can continue this story. Will look forward to that day but for now I'll follow your other books. (Do you have a discord server )

Cringe_Lord69420
Cringe_Lord69420Lv15Cringe_Lord69420

Im still waiting, and I will wait till the end of the world

Tia_001
Tia_001Lv4Tia_001

I really enjoyed reading your novels author and fell in love with them , especially this masterpiece and white online that made me read your novels❤️ ... I really hope you come back to writing of part 2

Seth_Bailey_6914
Seth_Bailey_6914Lv11Seth_Bailey_6914

thanks for the story Now I have nothing I want to read and my 270 day login streak will die but thinks for the ride and get to feeling better soon mental health is very important

Aanand_Paliwal
Aanand_PaliwalLv10Aanand_Paliwal

will there be new chapters? I am waiting since faaaar tooo long sigh! and will keep waiting Author.. .🥲